A hawk,

Will never Learn

how to fly, strutting;

around a barn, with Chickens!



Must jump,

From the cliff;

Risking death, for flight!


Risk living;

Dying in submission;

Day after day, strutting

Around a barn, with chickens!

© Jay Kaushal

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9 thoughts on “You are a hawk

    1. Thank you so much. I am so happy I have found a person who believes in my writing. That’s the effect I wanted that word to have. Strutting seems all aggressive and proud yet it barely makes up for the fact that the proud rooster can’t fly. Strut is all he can do. He can only throw his weight around on other chickens.. Don’t be a chicken. Take the plunge. 😉

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      1. Someone once told me, “great art deserves appreciation!” My words are merely serving an example to that! Your mighty works deserve all the appreciation.
        Hahaha! The explanation of strutting was fun to read😂

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  1. Good comparison even though each creature is designed to do different things. You used the comparison well to make a great point for life. I would much rather be hawk, better yet an eagle.


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